Like Pets On The Earth Like Birds In The Skies Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Like Pets On The Earth Like Birds In The Skies

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Sit on the earth like a faithful pet
and fly in the sky like the loyal birds
The pets and the birds fore see an earthquake.
Man feels it when the roof falls upon.
Learn something from the birds and the pets,
how they become restless before a disaster.

The lovers ecstatic in their flight of romance
drinking wine of joy during a courtship dance
always misjudge their ecstasy of weak moments
as a love that can keep them together always.

Most couples succeed in building a shock proof house
as they go on strengthening the basement by
by looking at their faces in their children's faces.
Their children force them to pass a life of compromises.

Gradually the ecstasy of weak moments
undergoes through a process of evolution
it takes time to be changed in a true love.
The lovers during a short separation
when start missing each other,
thinking and regretting
their misdeeds and misbehaviors
it's love that has started now.

A residence is changed in a shock proof house
with a strong basement of love and understanding
secured walls formed by the children
and a durable roof built by blessings of God.
It can withstand the earthquakes of life
that do not announce before their arrivals.

But like lovely pets
on the earth
and like birds
in the skies
romance and conjugal life may run side by side.
That's how a conjugal life is a beauty to enjoy.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 19 August 2017

Unless a house is built on the strong foundation of love, life well not become enjoyable! We have to discern and foresee the warnings of Nature like animals and birds and take adequate precautions! A fine write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 August 2017

We have to learn many arts from even birds and animals. Every creature has special features within. Faithfulness can be learnt from pet and flying from bird. Generally man feels this while roof falls down but he should feel this truth earlier and carefully live in Earth performing good actions is right way. Residence made in matters becomes perishable in calamities like flood or earthquake but residence made in blessings and trust of God is spiritual residence and no natural calamity can destroy this. Such a residence is of course residence of wisdom. You have deeply observed life and penned this philosophical poem. This carries true observation. An excellent poem is shared here is marvelous....10

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Spiro Ujewe-zaz 17 August 2017

Nice! Nice conceit. Beautiful summary of contracting and sustaining family.

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