Rohit Sharma

Rookie - 8 Points (July 6,1984 / Amritsar, India)

Like Your Sky - Poem by Rohit Sharma

Wherever you go, wherever you are
You'll find me there, no matter how far
It doesn't matter how distant you fly
I'll always be with you, Just like your sky....

If ever you feel, hot sun rays around
I'll become a cloud to sooth your surround
If ever you feel alone, lonely and solitaire
I'll become your shadow to always be there....

If ever clouds of sadness surrounds
Let them rain on me with all their bounds
If something bothers or you're upset or hurt
Allow those pains and troubles to hit me first....

Ever since you've come in my life
You've spread around a trap of smiles
Now I've understood the true way of living
By getting lost in you, I've found my everything....

Wherever you go, I'll come with you
Will walk with you till the life is through
Wherever you are, no matter how far you fly
I'll always be with you, just like your sky! ! !


Comments about Like Your Sky by Rohit Sharma

  • (7/30/2010 7:36:00 AM)


    Absolutly wonderful good job i really love it (Report) Reply

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  • Unwritten Soul (7/25/2010 11:14:00 AM)


    Like your sky? ...hahahah..u know why i'm laughing? because we all sharing same sky... Yeah i know what u mean but i'm just joking! ..I love to smile when u say that u better be hurt first before the it hurt ur lover...if your lover say same thing, then poor to pain because it become confuse which one it should hurt first, again i just kidding...but the true comment is...Wonderful and Lovely...i give u 10...enough? if not i'll give more because u are my friend lol (Report) Reply

  • (6/29/2010 12:35:00 PM)


    You have soo much of love to express........ Again a heart taking poem (Report) Reply

  • (6/20/2010 4:10:00 AM)


    An all encompassing love poem, like the sky. Also saw a sacrificial love within the write. Well Done: D (Report) Reply

  • Gita Ashok (6/11/2010 2:13:00 AM)


    So very beautiful.

    If something bothers or you're upset or hurt
    Allow those pains and troubles to hit me first....

    This is pure selflessness in love.

    It reminded me of one old Hindi song:
    Tu jahaan jahaan chalega
    Mera saaya saatth hogaa...
    The title number from 'Mera Saaya' sung by Lata Mangeshkar.
    (Report) Reply

  • Gita Ashok (6/11/2010 2:12:00 AM)


    So very beautiful.

    If something bothers or you're upset or hurt
    Allow those pains and troubles to hit me first....

    This is pure selflessness in love.

    It reminded me of one old Hindi song:
    Tu jahaan jahaan chalega
    Mera saaya saatth hogaa...
    The title number from 'Mera Saaya' sung by Lata Mangeshkar.
    (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 22, 2010



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