Kites, Like Two Of Us Poem by Rohit Sharma

Kites, Like Two Of Us

Rating: 2.7

Feel my love and let our hearts fly
Like two beautiful kites in the sky....
Away from the rules of this world
Just in control of thread of our love! ! !

Come in my arms; let our fears go by
Like two beautiful kites in the sky....
Hugging each other amidst deep love
Feelings; as pious as a white dove! ! !

Love this moment; let our souls enjoy
Like two beautiful kites in the sky....
Loving each other's presence around
Away from sins, only love to surround

Lets go far, lets make a try
Like two beautiful kites in the sky....
Making love in the heaven up above
Rising higher in the depth of love! ! !

Baby, we two are like those kites
Sometimes closer; sometimes fights....
Still we love to fly high in the sky
Tangling in love; until we die! ! !

Gan Chennai 26 June 2010

Kites when come close, threads get entangled. We used to call this as 'DEAL' in childhood. Let there be no DEALS; but LEELS. All the Best.

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Monica Engeler 26 June 2010

Very nicely written. Like the comparison of kite and love.

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Anita Trivedi 29 June 2010

great poem truely difine's selfless love..................

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Amrit Rathi 21 June 2010

Very Good poem with noble love! nicely penned with marvelous imagination. rated 9/10. Visit my poem I've fallen in love....and THE enjoy further in love! Thanks for inviting.

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The freedom of true love. Beautifully described through your poem! Beautiful! ; D

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??unknown?? 03 December 2020

I loved it so much๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•๐Ÿ’•

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Kalie 01 December 2020

It was beautiful

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ragini chauhan 07 January 2019

it is the best

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Ritushri Dinger 25 April 2014

beautiful poem with imagination and comparision.. :) just loved reading it

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Unwritten Soul 12 July 2010

It is like very nice imagination...i would like to see that two kites from sky by sitting on cozy white clouds, and blow a strong wind...Friend this is nice but, what make the kites fly high is depend on the wind and weather, and the wind that help ur love kites is only trust and to each other, once u trust there is no reason to this poem as usual

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Rohit Sharma

Rohit Sharma

Amritsar, India
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