Limited Freedom Poem by Namitha Raju

Limited Freedom

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Sitting on the carpet of light
woven by the window bars,
a sense of longing stroke me tight...

It seems at times, that my thirst for light
and fence-less grounds
laid in satisfied by the windows...

And now it seems my love
for that place, poured over by sunshine,
arose from the same reason...

Monday, July 9, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: freedom,light,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Namitha Raju 14 October 2018

☺️👍🏼

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Jazib Kamalvi 09 July 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Namitha. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Chinedu Dike 09 July 2018

Well conceived and elegantly brought forth. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Namitha.

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Irfanulla Shariff 09 July 2018

Great write! Just keep on writing. All the best!

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