Theorem The Truth Serum

Rookie - 245 Points (1979-present / San Leandro)

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Life is a line
And I am drawing a fine one
And I am writing a new one
To tackle each step with intensity
A fluid motion of comprehension
A pretense of knowledge
Swirling inside everyone’s day
Your knowledge is different
My knowledge is mine
I breathe in deeply
I understand my definition
What I say is me can only be me
What you say is only a consideration
Though one may know me well
Life is a line
And I am drawing a fine one
And I am writing a new one
I am defining a new life
With every action that I take
And every aspect that is real
My perception is the hand that draws and writes
What is real to me is all in my poetry
The thing that solves everything is discipline
The discipline of a soldier
But with a better destiny
I tackle my self to fall back on the line
I look at this line
I can see the chronology
And I am the scientist
Who measures my line
Who measures it’s distance
Who creates it’s distance
Life is a line
And I am drawing a fine one
And I am writing a new one
It is my definition

Comments about ____________Line_____________ by Theorem The Truth Serum

  • (1/15/2006 1:20:00 PM)

    I am not easily to impress but I really have to say, I am! A wonderful piece of art, Cokbod Lodwogo. Hopefully your line won't come to an end for a long long time. (Report) Reply

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  • Angelique' Rockwell (9/15/2005 3:26:00 PM)

    love it........sounds like it should be a song! (Report) Reply

  • (9/11/2005 9:49:00 PM)

    Wow, I really like this. Great job on it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 3, 2005

Poem Edited: Monday, February 26, 2007

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