Theorem The Truth Serum

Rookie - 245 Points (1979-present / San Leandro)

A Place That Is Pure - Poem by Theorem The Truth Serum

A grand building was built
so that people could come to worship.
The cup of blood was forged out of gold
so that people would not mind drinking
it in the early hours of the morning.
A melodic song was written
so that a band could be placed
in the back of the church
to make sure that everyone was entertained.
Donuts were bought for after mass
so that this church could be a socializing community.
All of this money spent sickens me.
All of the Catholics condone this behavior.
I have even heard them say how beautiful the church is.
This is why I can not be amongst you anymore.
I choose to worship alone in a place that is pure,
my heart.


Comments about A Place That Is Pure by Theorem The Truth Serum

  • ngaio beck (7/1/2008 2:00:00 PM)


    I say old fellow, I like this one.Don't worry about the catholic religion you've abandoned, soon it will be gone along with all 'christianity'.All that will remain, (of that lot) , is the television 'circus' religions. (Report) Reply

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  • (12/4/2007 11:53:00 PM)


    GREAT JOB!
    Always,
    Linda
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  • (10/8/2005 11:56:00 AM)


    this poem has impact and i could relate to it as i was brougt up in that religion...nice work (Report) Reply

  • (10/8/2005 8:46:00 AM)


    Good for you! ! ! ! Very well written! ! I feel the same. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 8, 2005



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