Lines That Separate Poem by jerry hughes

Lines That Separate



I have a sense of desperation because
the next turn on this rutted road is blind.
I'm unable to control my direction, or destiny.

Headlights on high beam mar my vision.
I can't see the white lines that separate life
from serious injury, or death.

Then it happened, my mind turned off.
I pressed the accelerator to the floor,
relishing the eerie squeal of the tyres
and the oncoming horrendous crash.

'No need to rush, ' a paramedic said.
He's terribly dead.'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 10 November 2007

'Terribly dead' is brilliant. The lines that separate are a brilliant metaphor for the mind going off the rails - either in a dream or in a moment of irrationality. Thank god your inner child has thus far kept you safe. A fascinating piece that helps the reader understand. love, Allie xxxx

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Ivan Donn Carswell 05 November 2007

Jerry, the poetic vision (as encapsulated in the last two lines) is also terribly good! Rgds, Ivan

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