Sunday, August 30, 2015

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Girl sits in front of a
Pink and white vanity,
Feeling vain
But rather plain
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Cailey Martin
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Fabrizio Frosini 30 August 2015

''Not on in the mirror but / On the mirror, '' I think it's redundant.. there's no need to put those 2 lines in such a good poem, Cailey.. believe me.. ;)

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Cailey Martin 31 August 2015

Thanks for your feedback!

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Anil Kumar Panda 30 August 2015

Beautiful poetry.Thanks for sharing.Liked it.

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Cailey Martin 31 August 2015

Thank you for reading!

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David Wood 30 August 2015

Nice mirror poem. Keep up the good work.

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Cailey Martin 31 August 2015

Thanks so much, David.

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