Little Boy Blue Poem by DM W

Little Boy Blue

Rating: 5.0


Little Boy Blue has got hip to new shoes.
Having purchased the latest pair of Nike's.
He's no longer blue. Indeed, he's real street wise;
No longer the victim of quaint nursery rhymes.

Little Boy Blue
Saturday, July 18, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: humorous
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 18 July 2020

Oh very, very good! I like it Dominic.I like it a lot! Completely got me and suckered me in. And I never saw it coming. So cleverly written and your final line is to die for. I thought it was going one way then does a U-turn. 10++ and well done, an excellent variation on an old theme with a most modern twist. Thank you Dominic and I wish you well.

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