Little Red Planet(For Scarlett) Comments

This is a wonderful piece of writing. I suppose I could say that the line breaks do disturb the reading of the lines, but the beauty of the piece is so wonderful that I hate to push the point. Greenwolfe 1962

My youngest daughter has a strawberry birthmark on her neck, and when she was a babe, I just wanted to taste her neck, and always remember that tiny birthmark which is now covered by her long hair....and now, you have offered that tiny space of memory for me. Thanks, love, for returning it to me this way. Scarlett

Such a gorgeous little offering from your universe. I lapped it up! Forgive me it was delicious. I can still taste the salty tang of your skin. What a beautiful world you have created in this perfect little piece. love Dee Dee