Tuesday, October 18, 2016

Little Red Rose Comments

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The little red rose was full of the joys,
As she frolicked and played on the green,
The little red rose shared all of her toys,
Along with her hopes and her dreams,
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John Kelly
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Kelly Kurt 23 October 2016

Nicely written, John. Thank you

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Dipankar Sadhukhan 19 October 2016

Beautifully expressed.... You are invited to read my poems and write few words on the same if you like them.

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John Kelly 19 October 2016

Many thanks... will do

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Sandra Feldman 18 October 2016

So beautifully sad. Sorry the ending was so tragic and bad

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John Kelly 19 October 2016

Thanks... tragedy always seems to play a part in poems!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 October 2016

It was time to return to the garden above. Little rose was full of joy. Very wonderful poem this is really. Nicely penned memorial poem.10

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John Kelly 19 October 2016

Thanks for the kind words

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