Little Snowflake (When You Loose Your Teenage Heart) Poem by Ray Quesada

Little Snowflake (When You Loose Your Teenage Heart)

Rating: 4.3


She walks in
as peacefully
as a snowflake
falling in serene
winter silence
why does her gaze
have to be as sweet
as the wind?
as alluring as a lake?
Am I as fascinating
to her as she is to me? ?

- - - - - - - -

I have this little
lighthearted crush
-there is so much wisdom
in a little crush
when you can have one
with a teenager's
heart, that is...
with the heart we
think we outgrow
- when you loose
your teenage heart
you may as well be dead.

- - - - - - - - -

-she's such a cool customer
and she is one of the only
girls i've met in so long
that has reminded me
that i want to fall
inescapably in love
someday. - - - - - - - - -

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amanda Laurent 31 March 2013

That feeling is one part of my teenage years I'd want to hang on to forever! Love the similes in the first stanza, too.

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