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On Stars That Twinkle

Rating: 4.9

When Mind is baked,
time Thinkles
When it rains,
the puddles Plinkle
when we cry,
eyes blink and Winkle
lose your mind - go see a Shrinkle

The beer we drink
goes Drinkle-drinkle

Addiction makes
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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
just a little diddy I wrote earlier this year
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Owain Glyn 01 December 2012

This is a very clever construction, it would have been very easy to get lost.

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Red O'mara 17 October 2012

The rhymes are beautiful, love the poem. But without even a glimpse of a woman, Ray.

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Valerie Dohren 15 October 2012

Very innovative - like it very much.

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Unwritten Soul 13 October 2012

hahahaha it sounds fun, funny and refreshing, mucha gracias for twinkle to wrinkle Quesada! _Soul

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Chandra Thiagarajan 13 October 2012

Nice enchanting write which captures the heart. Oh! What rhymes! I loved and enjoyed it. Thanks and wishes.

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