Monday, November 2, 2015

Living Alone Comments

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I like to live here all alone
Just me the telly and me phone
No-one to tell me what to do
Or moan when I buy something new
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annette banham
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Jazib Kamalvi 08 April 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Annette. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thanks

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Asia Villaflor 30 June 2016

So really nice and so realistic. I have seen this situation to my mom whos been separated to my stepdad. Yoy wrtting is kind a bit awesome to me cause its not a copycat or pretending for some kind of poetry. It is your own poetry style and creation. You have done it so nice.

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Fabrizio Frosini 02 November 2015

:) a humorous write, with a truth in it.. thanks for sharing, Annette - and keep on posting.. ;) Cheers

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Rajnish Manga 02 November 2015

First, let me extend a very warm welcome to you on the poetry Forum. Thanks for sharing an amazing poem. About 45 years back, I also had a somewhat similar experience but then I shifted to a separate room and regaled the freedom like you did. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks.

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Valerie Dohren 02 November 2015

My husband passed away just over two years ago, and since then I have disliked living on my own, but your poem reminds me that there are advantages and made me smile. Good one.

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