Sunday, September 30, 2018

Living Everyone's Pain Comments

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When my back hurts,
It's because I carry the weight of the world on my shoulders,
That is why we must let others help with our problems.
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Colleen Cleary
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Jazib Kamalvi 04 February 2020

Write comment. Such an impressive start, Colleen. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Susan Williams 09 November 2018

I like your thoughts and how you expressed them. Thank you for sharing this- -very nicely done

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Susheela Shiju 06 October 2018

Good thought

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Chinedu Dike 02 October 2018

Well thought out and nicely brought forth from the heart. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing Colleen and do remain enriched.

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Alison mujati 01 October 2018

Colleen Cleary....feelings poem 101 good start keep it up.

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