Living Force Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Living Force



I just present my views
And remain know too few
Wish to be your part
With life beginning new start

So far I was cool
To be called fool
Never knew what the real love meant?
I felt it dry like sand in desert

How many insects live there?
Making life beautiful without fear
Flowers appear with typical colors
As if to show “Yes we are child of rare showers”

Everything is in scarce
Yet we create no farce
We are living force
Provide to the world real source

Man with such qualities is welcome
Who can convert desert into nice for someone!
I wish someone comes from behind and embraces
To bring cheers and smile on face

Living Force
Wednesday, March 25, 2015
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 March 2015

I just present my views And remain know too few

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 March 2015

Thanks a lot, dear poet, for such a nicely written positive poem. Debasmita Saha, guskara-burdwan Mar 27,2015

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 March 2015

In your following lines resounds the Upanishad's hymn addressed to the God Sun represented by Tagore in his own way~ At your splendor's brim Humans sighted their nobility supreme - That from age to age you did compile By the Persian gulf or Nile. Said they - Sons of the Immortal we are - Visioned that Superman From beyond the darkness blazing golden Your lines resonating above ~ Flowers appear with typical colors As if to show “Yes we are child of rare showers” ......................... ........................... We are living force Provide to the world real source Man with such qualities is welcome Who can convert desert into nice for someone! Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata Mar 27,2015

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 March 2015

Hasmukh Mehta wlcom patpantod Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 March 2015

Sanaa Uppal Sir Hasmukh Mehta.. your poetic words are deeply felt and greatly cherished Love and regards ♡ sanaa 7 hrs · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 March 2015

welcome Singh Anand Sattie likes this. Just now · Unlike · 1

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