Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 385,133 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Living Force - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I just present my views
And remain know too few
Wish to be your part
With life beginning new start

So far I was cool
To be called fool
Never knew what the real love meant?
I felt it dry like sand in desert

How many insects live there?
Making life beautiful without fear
Flowers appear with typical colors
As if to show “Yes we are child of rare showers”

Everything is in scarce
Yet we create no farce
We are living force
Provide to the world real source

Man with such qualities is welcome
Who can convert desert into nice for someone!
I wish someone comes from behind and embraces
To bring cheers and smile on face

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/27/2015 8:39:00 PM)


    Thanks a lot, dear poet, for such a nicely written positive poem.



    Debasmita Saha, guskara-burdwan
    Mar 27,2015
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/27/2015 8:36:00 PM)


    In your following lines resounds the Upanishad's hymn addressed to the God Sun represented by Tagore in his own way~
    At your splendor's brim
    Humans sighted their nobility supreme -
    That from age to age you did compile
    By the Persian gulf or Nile.
    Said they - Sons of the Immortal we are -
    Visioned that Superman
    From beyond the darkness blazing golden
    Your lines resonating above ~
    Flowers appear with typical colors
    As if to show “Yes we are child of rare showers”
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    ...........................
    We are living force
    Provide to the world real source
    Man with such qualities is welcome
    Who can convert desert into nice for someone!


    Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata
    Mar 27,2015
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/27/2015 3:20:00 AM)


    Hasmukh Mehta wlcom patpantod
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/26/2015 7:35:00 PM)


    Sanaa Uppal Sir Hasmukh Mehta.. your poetic words are deeply felt and greatly cherished
    Love and regards ♡
    sanaa
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/25/2015 11:13:00 PM)


    welcome Singh Anand Sattie likes this.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/25/2015 9:58:00 PM)


    I just present my views
    And remain know too few
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, March 25, 2015



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