abinash panda

Loneliness - Poem by abinash panda

In this strange rough world,
when i was first born,
i was loved by all so much,
so soft was their soothing touch.

but soon the world was exposed,
and all their love disposed,
into the deserts of time,
as i grew to 16 from nine,

i am now a teenager,
cares for nobody ever,
but i have no more close friends,
because i am not upto there trendz.

i m ugly, dark and fat,
thats how girls to me looked at,
so i have no interest in girls too
as i have nothing for them to woo.

at this tender age of mine,
my parents never understand me,
with them i never dine,
as the could only depress me.

so i have no friends to share,
no girls to stare,
no parents to discuss,
what contributes to my lowly status.

in this world of misery
i live in a place called emptiness,
in here is my birthright companion,
my only best friend...... loneliness.

Topic(s) of this poem: loneliness

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Comments about Loneliness by abinash panda

  • (10/28/2015 2:48:00 AM)

    Guplu very gud attempt... Pleased to explore ur literary penchant.keep on writing. Day b day it will b garnished with elegant flavour flavours.... My gud wishes for u (Report) Reply

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  • (10/28/2015 2:34:00 AM)

    Flamboyant mind and boisterous youth drifted u to a monotonous loath.................. Ur tryst with a utopia Faded away d essence of genuine lov Lov z all around u still u grope for lov.......... Time has elapsed n ur taste has been changed No more r u d moms boy pampered. Again tym will come and remind u Wht u called seclusion or loneliness Z nothing bt a childish shade. (Report) Reply

    Abinash Panda (10/28/2015 4:24:00 AM)

    ha ha ha.. timel ia a lethal aspect of our life... ur time has shown u the truth... now i wait for mine.. hope it has the same effect as urs.. thank u auntie.. or mami... u made my dAy

  • (10/28/2015 2:25:00 AM)

    Flamboyant mind and boisterous youth Drifted u to a monotonous loath.... Ur strong tryst with a utopia Has faded away (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (10/24/2015 5:07:00 PM)

    Nicely written, Abinash. I don't think I learned what true loneliness was until I was an adult (Report) Reply

  • Abinash Panda (10/24/2015 12:30:00 PM)

    I m glad u liked it (Report) Reply

  • Abinash Panda (10/24/2015 12:29:00 PM)

    Thanks.. Everybody (Report) Reply

  • (10/24/2015 12:19:00 PM)

    Guplu I am so glad to find a poet within you.I go through your poem more than 10 times and every time it touched me so much.I am proud of you...keep it up. (Report) Reply

    Abinash Panda (10/24/2015 2:54:00 PM)

    thank u mamu... ders more to come...

  • Fabrizio Frosini (10/24/2015 8:47:00 AM)

    ''at this tender age of mine,
    my parents never understand me, ''

    a common feeling.. often but not always true.. anyway, Souren's right in his comment
    Thanks for sharing, Abinash
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  • Saheb Mohapatra (10/24/2015 4:33:00 AM)

    yes during this age loneliness becomes our best friend..........very true write............i would also tell you that this loneliness also adds up to our maturity and sometimes in writing such beautiful poems. (Report) Reply

  • Abinash Panda (10/24/2015 3:16:00 AM)

    hope u likd it.. nd check out my new poem.. my best friend (Report) Reply

  • Abinash Panda (10/24/2015 3:14:00 AM)

    my first poem... hope u liked it (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (10/24/2015 3:03:00 AM)

    A very good expression of the state of a mind of every teenager.. We had all been there- us, who had gone and grown through that age..

    P: S: Don't worry about what others think of you, as they say 'kuch to lok kahenge logo ka kaam hai kehna' ;)
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    Abinash Panda (10/24/2015 3:14:00 AM)

    thank u sir... i appreciate itvery much.. plzz check out my new poem

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 24, 2015

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