Lonely Poem by Tinashe Mupedzapasi

Lonely

Rating: 5.0


The bed is cold and the night is empty
The night is long
Starring at the curtain dancing to the cold night winds
I have nothing to do no words to utter
The bed is cold and empty
I cant make it warm
I'm alone, where art thou
You didn't text tonight
I thought you would stop by
This night is long and cold
i need you here

Wednesday, February 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 15 February 2018

Without him near the night seems so long and lonely. Wish he should at least give a call. Nice poem.10+++

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Tinashe Mupedzapasi 17 February 2018

Thank you Anil

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 July 2020

This night is long and cold i need you here.......beautiful loving poem penned......deserves 10+

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Mahtab Bangalee 30 July 2020

The bed is cold The night is rough dark The day is scorching light The whole is bitter empty Oh! it's not life; it seems dead alive....o dear without you everything is painful everywhere is dreadful please come come o love

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 October 2019

I have nothing to do no words to utter The bed is cold and empty I cant make it warm. expressive of the world lonely........ a fine poem. tony

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Tinashe Mupedzapasi 04 October 2019

Thank you Tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 22 August 2018

I cant make it warm I'm alone, where art thou You didn't text tonight I thought you would stop by...i need you especially when it is cold in me.......... thank u for such fine expressions dear poet. love ur poems. tony

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 February 2018

Tinashe, such a well expressed poetic feelings...10+++++

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