Tuesday, May 27, 2014

Lonely Joy Comments

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Three A.M.
and the humid night
weeps softly
like a child.
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Uriah Hamilton
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Compelling care and compassion. Well done my friend!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 June 2014

Scenes portrayed skillfully in narrative poem. Great mixed images freeverse style. Pls do review my latest poem too.

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Susan Lacovara 01 June 2014

Just yesterday, while listening to old songs, the flood of summer days gone to the seclusion of stored up memories, came back unexpectedly...a postcard from my past. Your words echo the longing and loneliness I felt. You craft your emotions with such honesty. PEACE

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Winter 30 May 2014

I love the atmosphere you created with this beautiful piece.

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