Julie A Smith

Rookie - 203 Points (Illinois)

Longing For Love - Poem by Julie A Smith

Aching.
Longing.
Museful pondering.
Hopes peak and blossom
like a tender and delicate white rose
perched precariously
on the edge of a mountain peak.
Hopes plummet and swirl
downward
downward
downward
into a rushing
rocky
tumult
of
unsettled
and chaotic
waters.
Time passes
and the water stills
with a calm and peaceful
serenity.
Hopes spring anew
with vibrancy
and a tender compassion
and fresh promise
and wonder
if they
can begin again
anew?


Comments about Longing For Love by Julie A Smith

  • Jez Brul (1/25/2018 7:03:00 PM)

    Time passes
    and the water stills
    with a calm and peaceful
    serenity.

    Finely crafted imagery..thank you for sharing...rated 10++++
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 5, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 9, 2013


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