Saturday, August 29, 2015
Longing (Haiku) Comments
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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul
29 August 2015
Come and bless our land. So pleasing sound to reduce the distance between mountains and echo. Wonderful drafting....10
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12/22/2025 7:16:13 PM # 1.0.0
a good one, Elizabeth, but in classic haiku there are not exclamation marks.. try a '-' as a kireji, at the end of the 2nd line.. The distant echo from the mountains high resounds - Come and bless our land Cheers Fabrizio