Elizabeth Padillo Olesen


Longing (Haiku) - Poem by Elizabeth Padillo Olesen

The distant echo
from the mountains high resounds!
Come and bless our land!

Topic(s) of this poem: haiku, longing


Comments about Longing (Haiku) by Elizabeth Padillo Olesen

  • Fabrizio Frosini (8/29/2015 4:32:00 PM)


    a good one, Elizabeth, but in classic haiku there are not exclamation marks..
    try a '-' as a kireji, at the end of the 2nd line..

    The distant echo
    from the mountains high resounds -
    Come and bless our land

    Cheers
    Fabrizio
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  • Bhargabi Dei Mahakul (8/29/2015 4:18:00 PM)


    Come and bless our land. So pleasing sound to reduce the distance between mountains and echo. Wonderful drafting....10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 29, 2015



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