R. Ariffin

Johor, Peninsular Malaysia
R. Ariffin
Johor, Peninsular Malaysia

Look Into My Eyes

Rating: 5.0
So you may see that a soul can never transcend
Without the other to occupy its absence
That absence is the common singular of loneliness
And loneliness is madness to my conscience

So you may understand that my devotion is celestial
That extends and gyrating in beauty afar
And ignorance is a soundless and heartless supernova
That kills and obliterates every living star

So you may remember that hope is like an ocean
That love is nothing but waves upon your feet
And the heart is nothing but sands on the shore
That is constantly altered and shaped by it
Friday, June 19, 2009
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COMMENTS
Chinedu Dike 23 May 2020
Well conceived and nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful creation.
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Sonya Florentino 09 October 2009
beautiful....last stanza is just amazing.....!
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Patti Masterman 09 October 2009
I don't know how one learns to write like this, but I'm so glad I get to read it..(smile)
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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 June 2009
'So you may remember that hope is like an ocean That love is nothing but waves upon your feet And the heart is nothing but sands on the shore That is constantly altered and shaped by it' Lovely write,10+++
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rago rago 19 June 2009
a good write and constantly altered and shaped.........my eyes certainly a crest......
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