Look Up Poem by Barry Middleton

Look Up

Rating: 5.0


it's hard to find the light
from the bottom of a well
but if you look straight up
it lifts you from your hell

don't look to left or right
you'll only see a wall
don't look upon your feet
that's where the shadows fall

it's hard to find much hope
within a darkened pit
you may seem paralyzed
you feel that you should quit

but drifting overhead
still shines the awesome blue
so just look up to see
it's waiting there for you

Look Up
Friday, August 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: spirituality
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 21 August 2017

Wowwwwww. what an uplifting n inspiring write. Very well penned. Gives a lot of hope. Perfect rhythm. A huge 10.

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Barry Middleton 21 August 2017

Thanks Nosheen. Forgive me if I do not respond. I am not doing well with my illness.

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Upendra Upm 18 August 2017

sheer brilliance and beautiful like appleflowers bunched exuberantly.

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