Looking Down Poem by Mohammad Younus

Looking Down

Rating: 5.0


Looking down...
...from the top of a precipice,
Deep down...
...into the dark valley below,
Long I stood there, ...
...stunned, wondering, fearing,
Seeing, noticing...
...no living beings moving,
Only phantom spirits hiding...
...to escape being tormented,
Even when they are dead,
Never imagined to dream...
...such a horrific dream!
The silence of the graveyard...
...was unbroken,
And the only word there spoken...
...as the whispered word...
'This land is ours! '
This they all whispered, and an echo...
...murmured back,
'The land we watered with our blood! '
This is still echoing and nothing more! ! !

Mykoul

Looking Down
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nabakishore Dash 21 August 2021

A nice patriotic poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 August 2021

Profound Patriotic Poem. Excellent!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 20 August 2021

Powerful words, great love to the homeland 5 Stars full Very patriotic poem

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