Tuesday, July 22, 2008

Looking For A Freshness Comments

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I live to explore!
Not to sit in the midst of discoveries...
To be compared by others,
As the way my life should be!
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Ronald Stroman 22 July 2008

some Poets i can't ignore. they keep postin' good sh.t. that don't get censored; the other s.oab.tches who get censored... even know. some of us Poets are self-less, that's why we keep postin'... until one really has to pay for what we say.

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Susan Jarvis 22 July 2008

This poem lays open so many questions: aren't the findings of others the basis behind a fresh eye? Can we truly possess a unique outlook without glancing backwards? Does this make the past as significant as the future, or should we ignore it and rediscover? A wonderful poem! Thank you, Lawrence, for encouraging my fresh eye. S ;)

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