Looking Through An Old Poetry Journal Poem by Not Long Left

Looking Through An Old Poetry Journal

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The pages in my
old journal are like
the gutter of a house.
streams of unfelt
words washing from
the roof down into
the overfill.
slowly draining
into the sewer.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I can relate.1 in 5 I don't destroy, but the other 4 are flaming turds...

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Duncan Wyllie 19 May 2006

To filter then move on, but even in filtering I would think that you can find gold nuggits A clever write, Love Duncan X

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