Wednesday, May 27, 2020

Looking Up And Down Comments

Rating: 5.0

A girl looked at the night sky through the window.
Amidst thousand stars, she failed to recognize
her father's twinkling face, the moon shine
seemed to be her father's smile.
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Sankhajit Bhattacharjee
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Kostas Lagos 27 May 2020

A well written poem.The contrast between what is visible and what is invisible is superb!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 May 2020

Darkness floated like an old preying vulture.. wonderful poetic imagination! Her coclusive glance at darkness provides enough food to this wonderful poem...beautifully composed! Top marks

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