A girl looked at the night sky through the window.
Amidst thousand stars, she failed to recognize
her father's twinkling face, the moon shine
seemed to be her father's smile.
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Darkness floated like an old preying vulture.. wonderful poetic imagination! Her coclusive glance at darkness provides enough food to this wonderful poem...beautifully composed! Top marks
A well written poem.The contrast between what is visible and what is invisible is superb!