Loosing Self Poem by Asif Baloch

Loosing Self

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Those words which I wrote
on the canvas of my thoughts
are scattered all around

Those dreams which I sew
with the thread of hopes
are broken and gone

Those wishes thus I made
to be loved not hate
are flooded and drowned

no hopes remained to be cleft
no wishes to be made
no dreams to be found
no rising to the sky
no falling to the ground
no feelings are left
no happiness do accept
my being my fate

in the mirror as i once saw
a smiling face, full of love
is faded and gone

Ah! just the thought of
loosing self is left
or I may be lost

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 08 October 2009

well expressed abstract poem, deep ideas well embedded.....10+++

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Akram Saqib 28 February 2009

hi baloch your poems are as goog as of a great poet.please send me your comments about my poems. saqib baloch

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Sandra Fowler 27 February 2009

It would be tragic indeed to lose even the thought of oneself. Excellent poem. kind regards, Sandra

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