Lost Soul Poem by Asif Baloch

Lost Soul

Rating: 5.0


Pierced my heart
Rhymes thus I wrote
Love and loneliness
On the tide of thoughts tho float

Trembling like a leaf
Ready to fall
Falling like this
Never to rise
Floating in the winds
Of sorrows and denials
Thinking with the heart
Brain is froze

Yearns and sighs
Filled in the air
Waving like a blind
For hand to hold
Crying like a child
For motherly love
Forgot the reality
I’m aging old

I never have accomplished
Anything in this life
Thinking like a fool that
He might, put the time on hold
Pleading and crying
Wondering in the mist
I’m the one they call
Miserable, lost soul

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammed Albalushi 27 November 2008

wonderfull writing full of feelings of lost soul

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*Trusting You* 27 November 2008

He might, put the time on hold great line... and a amazing ending! ! ! ! ! I really like it. good job. Becca

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Seema Aarella 27 November 2008

misery of the lost soul brought out very well....a timeless write!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 November 2008

Your lost soul will be taken care of by the Angels of Guardian my friend Asif.What a lovely piece from you bro.

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Little Hatila ;) 28 November 2008

'I’m the one they call Miserable, lost soul ' love it, it was nice to read it...well done...10 Hataw

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Great poem my friend as I never such imagery and creativity like this...thank you 10/10

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Yaseen Anwer 12 December 2008

Hey bro u r amazing matured stroke by pen with wonderful contruction.. Regards Yaseen Anwer

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Gargi Saha 09 December 2008

A wonderful poem. u get 10++..............

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Naru Kaede 09 December 2008

Wow, wonderful Aijaz.. Always in sadness... But keep in happy, but what God plans it's never known, This writes, just remembered me of something, Love this one, my dear friends, Wish happy in you, always, Naru Kaede,

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Omar Ali Sabar 08 December 2008

What you have acclomplished is a wonderful poem sir...10/10

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