Loosing Your World Poem by Cora Lee
Loosing Your World
Why do I bother putting make-up on
this beautifly broken face?
My shattered soul has taken its toll,
on this put-back-together place.
Tears falling down, who notices
the pain that comes from inside?
Because my heart is in half, I've ran from the path,
to the safe arms of danger to hide.
Cracked limbs and broken wings,
I lay on the cold ground,
They are no longer vital without you-my survival
to this earth I slip deeper, without a sound.
Im in love with this rhyme scheme i think its very clever..Im also liking the poems mood..the rhyme scheme really helps the feeling along. Great writing
I love the rhyme scheme you attempt to use here, it's really interesting. the rhythm is a little patchy, but maybe something to work on if you ever re-write it? Overall, a really nice piece.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 5:09:11 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Cracked limbs and broken wings nice sad lyric poem...touching