Lora’s Look Poem by Lento Maez

Lora’s Look

Rating: 4.8


Lora Lee sat next to me
I gazed into her eyes
It made me think
Did I see her wink

Or did I blink
Was something in my eyes

My mind went crazy
My tongue got lazy
I couldn’t speak
My knees felt weak

Then I saw her smile
It took me awhile
To catch my breath
I was scared to death

She rose and left
But waved goodbye
I felt so bad
I wanted to cry

Farewell Lora Lee
I hope you can see
What you did to me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 13 January 2014

It's a wonderful poem of natural, innocent feelings. The poem has amazingly described what happens when Loras sit beside a poet, look at him, take leave and wave good bye, little aware that they have cast a lasting spell in the meanwhile and left them bewitched! Simply superb! Full marks,10/10. 'Farewell Lora Lee I hope you can see What you did to me' - It's the icing on the cake. @Sandra Feldman, I fully agree with you.

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Sandra Feldman 12 January 2014

Your poetry is like you, so full, may I say, of sweet, innocent charm! A pleasure to read, In these days, When words bleed.

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