Loss Poem by Dans Only

Loss

Rating: 5.0


The sky is falling!
The sky is falling!
Lightning strikes a dead cord in my heart.
Electrifying my senses
Numbing my emotions
Clawing at my psyche
With frustration and confusion.
Burning tears melt the mask
Leaving behind a featureless expression.
___No nose to smell
___No ears to hear
___No eyes to see
___No lips to kiss
I plummet into madness
With the falling sky.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Krystal Vincent 04 July 2009

i loved this poem. it was very unique and well writen.I can tell it came from the heart and thats all that matters when it comes to writing. i loved it so thinks for sharing this lol

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Hunter Dasten 04 February 2009

Very good my friend! You have captured the crazed thoughts that come from hopelessness when you've suffered a loss quite well.

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