Seen Poem by Dans Only

Seen

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Gazing across a crowded room
Looking, wondering, searching, hoping.
Destined for all eternity
Breathing in my misery
Shall I never be free
Truly happy
As the room begins to empty
Once again it starts anew.
Looking, wondering, searching, hoping.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Sinha 06 October 2009

Like the thirsty earth soaks up the rain, And drinks and gapes for drink again, I gaze, look, wonder, search and hope, not in vain, Amongst your sorrows and your pain The room is not an empty lane And you're filled with happiness, once again -10 anjali

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Fiona Davidson 25 January 2009

poignant self searching write Dans...thank you....

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searching to see if shall ever be happy...is not a virtue...most of the time love/happiness lies dead in the face

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