Loss, Lost, Lust Poem by alley 091

Loss, Lost, Lust

Rating: 3.8


I was lost 6 months ago
It was lust that drove my soul
I couldn't controll...
what happened that night
What a loss I say to you
It wasn't love
but why not try something new?
Why judge someone you don't know?
Just open your mind and go with the flow
But no...
You had left so many words unspoken
I have questions, but your mind still isn't open
What a loss I say to you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Erin Duphily 07 February 2008

I love this. It really says something. About what happens when you loosen your grip. And glide....it never works.

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Renae Goodman 21 May 2008

i love it. i can really relate to everything about this poem. it really says something and has true meaning that i think everyone at some point can deff. relate to. xoxo renae.

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Nithin Jacob 01 October 2008

I guess this poem reminds me a lot... a lot... thanks for the piece and reminds me a lot...

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Holly Heron 20 December 2006

i love this it spoke to me. holly xox

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Kayla S 16 May 2007

i really like this. i can relate alot to it.

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Adeeb Alfateh 09 July 2019

but why not try something new? Why judge someone you don't know? Just open your mind and go with the flow But no... great write great 10++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Mariah Doodles 03 May 2009

your poem is really beautiful.

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Courtney Hauber 13 January 2009

i love your poem it really touches my soul

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Jay Lawson 09 December 2008

is there a deeper meaning

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Brenna Prentice 03 December 2008

I personally do not love this poem. But what is love, and what is loss, When it is compared to everything else? XOBrennaOX

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