alley 091


Loss, Lost, Lust

Poem by alley 091

I was lost 6 months ago
It was lust that drove my soul
I couldn't controll...
what happened that night
What a loss I say to you
It wasn't love
but why not try something new?
Why judge someone you don't know?
Just open your mind and go with the flow
But no...
You had left so many words unspoken
I have questions, but your mind still isn't open
What a loss I say to you


Comments about Loss, Lost, Lust by alley 091

  • Adeeb AlfatehAdeeb Alfateh (7/9/2019 2:00:00 AM)

    but why not try something new?
    Why judge someone you don't know?
    Just open your mind and go with the flow
    But no...


    great write
    great 10++++++++++++++++++++++++(Report)Reply

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  • Mariah Doodles (5/3/2009 9:48:00 PM)

    your poem is really beautiful.(Report)Reply

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  • Courtney Hauber (1/13/2009 3:31:00 PM)

    i love your poem it really touches my soul(Report)Reply

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  • Jay Lawson (12/9/2008 3:42:00 PM)

    is there a deeper meaning(Report)Reply

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  • Brenna Prentice (12/3/2008 7:33:00 PM)

    I personally do not love this poem.
    But what is love, and what is loss,
    When it is compared to everything else?
    XOBrennaOX(Report)Reply

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  • Nithin Jacob (10/1/2008 1:49:00 PM)

    I guess this poem reminds me a lot... a lot... thanks for the piece and reminds me a lot...(Report)Reply

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  • Renae Goodman (5/21/2008 8:47:00 AM)

    i love it.
    i can really relate to everything about this poem.
    it really says something and has true meaning that i think everyone at some point can deff. relate to.
    xoxo
    renae.(Report)Reply

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  • Erin Duphily (2/7/2008 2:08:00 PM)

    I love this.
    It really says something.
    About what happens when you loosen your grip.
    And glide....it never works.(Report)Reply

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  • Kayla S (5/16/2007 3:26:00 PM)

    i really like this. i can relate alot to it.(Report)Reply

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  • Holly Heron (12/20/2006 11:07:00 PM)

    i love this it spoke to me. holly xox(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 1, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, August 20, 2010