alley 091

Loss, Lost, Lust - Poem by alley 091

I was lost 6 months ago
It was lust that drove my soul
I couldn't controll...
what happened that night
What a loss I say to you
It wasn't love
but why not try something new?
Why judge someone you don't know?
Just open your mind and go with the flow
But no...
You had left so many words unspoken
I have questions, but your mind still isn't open
What a loss I say to you

Comments about Loss, Lost, Lust by alley 091

  • (5/3/2009 9:48:00 PM)

    your poem is really beautiful. (Report) Reply

    1 person liked.
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  • (1/13/2009 3:31:00 PM)

    i love your poem it really touches my soul (Report) Reply

  • (12/9/2008 3:42:00 PM)

    is there a deeper meaning (Report) Reply

  • (12/3/2008 7:33:00 PM)

    I personally do not love this poem.
    But what is love, and what is loss,
    When it is compared to everything else?
    (Report) Reply

  • (10/1/2008 1:49:00 PM)

    I guess this poem reminds me a lot... a lot... thanks for the piece and reminds me a lot... (Report) Reply

  • (5/21/2008 8:47:00 AM)

    i love it.
    i can really relate to everything about this poem.
    it really says something and has true meaning that i think everyone at some point can deff. relate to.
    (Report) Reply

  • (2/7/2008 2:08:00 PM)

    I love this.
    It really says something.
    About what happens when you loosen your grip.
    And never works.
    (Report) Reply

  • (5/16/2007 3:26:00 PM)

    i really like this. i can relate alot to it. (Report) Reply

  • (12/20/2006 11:07:00 PM)

    i love this it spoke to me. holly xox (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 1, 2006

Poem Edited: Friday, August 20, 2010

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