Friday, September 16, 2005

Lost Again In Separate Jungles Comments

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You are a beautiful woman in a room of candles,
The aroma of jasmine drifts from the terrace,
I’ll sleep with you beneath the stars
And I’ll unlatch the shoes from your feet,
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Shannon Chapel 29 December 2005

This is absolutely divine! S

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Adriana Cruz 16 September 2005

an amazing poem, i must tell you. to treat a woman so delicately would be the greatest thing.

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Raynette Eitel 16 September 2005

Uriah, you have certainly been visited by the muse lately. Your poems are richer, more controlled, and lovely. Keep on keeping on (oh my gosh, another cliche!) Good work. Raynette

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Herbert Nehrlich1 16 September 2005

Great title, great poem Uriah. This is very well done again and ought to be read to some of the tough guys, the brawnies. H

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Mary Nagy 16 September 2005

The tenderness is so beautiful here Uriah. So nice. Sincerely, Mary

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 16 September 2005

Very sensual.....nice :)

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