Lost Forever Poem by Darkangel Flyfree

Lost Forever

Rating: 5.0


Trapped in time
trapped in mind
lonely desperate soul
searching endlessly
in depths of darkness
silence invades
no sounds escapes
too lost in void
to overcome sorrow
cant break loose
cant find myself
in this lonely time
a lonely soul
lost forever.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Guess Who 04 July 2012

There is a strange recipe in your poem ........ The recipe gives it the power of meaning it flows between the words giving it an effect of sorrow of grief. being alone can be good in times but the human nature always looks for others looks for it's own kind.......hope you find your way of the loneliness void Guess Who

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Ebi Robert 14 June 2012

Hmm! This dark pipe that flows through the lines is amazing.

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Dougie Fresh 14 June 2012

no sounds escapes, too lost in void just beautifully written! !

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 13 June 2012

trapped in time trapped in mind so powerful opening.........

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