Vampire Heart

Rookie (07/01/1992 / 9th circle of Hell)

Lost In Your Own World - Poem by Vampire Heart

Severe tides conceil pain beneath dark waters,
By the moonlight mezmerized you walk the path of shattered dreams,
To the fortress called night where lost souls dance,
To the melodic whispers of the dead widow's song.
Grey clouds embrace the sky,
Blanketing shattered mirror pieces called stars.
Drawn from the masquerade of true lies,
Fear lowers it's mask to see it's reflection in your eyes,
Truth blinds the cruel portrait and tears wash it away.

A soft kiss brings the dawn from it's knees,
And the sun to celestial gates.
But not even the angel wings of daylight,
Can breathe courage into your conscience.
For the fear you so much fear is you...


Comments about Lost In Your Own World by Vampire Heart

  • ~*~Secretive Shelby~*~ (12/8/2008 5:15:00 PM)

    Awesome job!
    It makes you think, and the word choice was amazing
    Very good write
    Scale 1-10......13!
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  • Heather HillHeather Hill (10/12/2008 9:02:00 PM)

    This is good really good! Keep it up! (Report)Reply

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  • Ency BearisEncy Bearis (10/12/2008 12:23:00 AM)

    a deep thoughts..conscience had to prevail..great write..

    Ency Bearis
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  • Ivan Donn Carswell (10/11/2008 11:45:00 PM)

    A deep and darkly toned piece of classical imagery. An almost sonnet! Bravo. Rgds, Ivan (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, October 11, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, October 13, 2008


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