Lost Love Poem by Scarlet .....

Lost Love

Rating: 2.6


fading from your eyes
vanishing from your heart
your words turn cold
body stiffens
mind drifts away
it breaks and crumbles
all falling away
your love for me
broken and jaded
lost among your
thoughts of yesterday

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Broken Peaces 26 November 2007

Nicely penned stressing something we have all felt worth 10 Chris x

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Thad Wilk 25 November 2007

This i like! very nicely phrased! Short but sweeet! A *10 *! ! ! ! ! Thad

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Uloia Norris Moore 25 November 2007

Yesterday today tomorrows will bring things of such beauty you can't help but sing. Good write

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