Lost Piece Poem by christian thurmond

Lost Piece

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my heart held down because my life as been hell bound,
nothings going right,
and i'm afraid I am losing the fight,
my love my life,
my life is over and there's no more pushing past,
because no, it never will last,
my love my life,
everything's lost, and at a deep vain cost,
now, all that's left is red, the red that I bled,
every drop makes me slip,
slip over the thought of you lips,
so preciouses love is,
but its threw me into darkness,
so my love my life,
is over,
my life pushed over,
my love threw away and no matter what people say,
nothing can mend my broken heart,
ill will forever be tore apart,
so my love my life is gone,
no matter what i've done,
there's no getting back because i've bled,
forgetting, everything you...... have said,

Wednesday, June 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: dark,darkness,heartbreak,heartbroken,horror,poem,poems
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 04 June 2015

Accurately penned emotions of the initial feelings about lost love. (It does eventually heal) Thanks for sharing, Christian. Peace

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Soul Watcher 04 June 2015

Oh, what a sad lovely poem this is, I really liked it, thanks for sharing these touching words. Waiting for more poems by you.

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