Saturday, January 3, 2015

Lost Puppy Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lost puppy
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Litter brothers and sisters
Of white and black and mottled color
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Geetha Jayakumar 06 January 2015

A beautiful poem with lovely description of cute puppies. Child's love for puppy is portrayed very well. Simply Beautiful. Loved reading it.

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Salini Nair 05 January 2015

beautiful poem...feel the innocence of children...nice

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Rajesh Thankappan 04 January 2015

As Valsa Ma'am has rightly pointed out, your poem is as cute as those puppies. Also I am pleased to see the story end on the right note.

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Valsa George 04 January 2015

Beagles are so cute to look at! Poor puppy lost in the puddle! So nice the little boy came to its rescue! Your poem is as cute as those puppies! Where were the rest while one strayed away?

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