Lovalue Poem by Jos- -siea

Lovalue

Rating: 5.0


What is love without acceptance
Wholly?

What about it makes it's existence holy?

Perhaps it is sacred, if it's done fully.

Perhaps it is rare for some to be done so purely

Perhaps it's not worth it for him, with too many checks missing
Perhaps it's not worth it for me,
If there's no capacity for it living

Perhaps you find it in agreement,
Reconciliation of views
Appreciation of difference
And celebration of achievement

Perhaps in commitments sake
We find it diminishes,
Perhaps the way he views it,
Determines why he envisages

Separation
As a concept of healing
However lack of love or commitment
Is the true subject of reeling

Through a particular feeling I felt of his
I gained a sense of what this is

If you can't accept yourself in present time
you'll never know true happiness

And you can paint over it in all the colors of the world
Eat fine cuisine and correct your physique
Find finery in things that are sold
And perfect your perfect technique

But a lack of satisfaction is rust
And metal is your core
time tells that in it,
there will be nothing to hold the paint on anymore

And in mine all I wanted was to peel back the layers
View it for what it was, in steel

Polish it truly over time
So you too could understand
beauty underneath what you see,
is real

Tuesday, April 20, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: heartbreak,unconditional love,attachment
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 01 May 2021

Such a nice poem, Jos. Read my poem, Love and L u s t. Thanks.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success