Love... Poem by pssive w nker

Love...

Rating: 5.0


points directional
thinks elevations
speaks longingly
touches exudations

making

... desirous...
come

to, upon, amidst, within

... YOU...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Herbert Nehrlich1 26 February 2009

I envy poets who are able to tell an entire story with so few words (well chosen I might add) and in such little space. And that applies here to a member of the lovely gender, all the more surprising knowing about predilection.... Tis is a brilliant poem, I must say and how apparent simplicity in action can end up as brilliant, that is a question I am still grappling with.It does though. Hxx

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Fiona Davidson 26 February 2009

Beautiful words...thank you...10++

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