Love? Poem by Jamal ugh

Love?

Rating: 5.0


Your eyes we're like a melody
i was guided by the tune
you never loved me
so only pain looms

I would give life
by the knife
to here that tune once more
this knife called lust

is all to trust just use
never gain
a parasite would be your name
I hate myself for loving you

just slip fom the black to the blue
i cut myself with the thought of you
but in the end i love you..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 03 May 2011

Great poem with a lot of wisdom. Wonderfully written. Great imagery. Fine poetics. A big...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2

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