Jamal ugh


Love? - Poem by Jamal ugh

Your eyes we're like a melody
i was guided by the tune
you never loved me
so only pain looms

I would give life
by the knife
to here that tune once more
this knife called lust

is all to trust just use
never gain
a parasite would be your name
I hate myself for loving you

just slip fom the black to the blue
i cut myself with the thought of you
but in the end i love you..


Comments about Love? by Jamal ugh

  • (5/3/2011 11:08:00 PM)


    Great poem with a lot of wisdom. Wonderfully written. Great imagery.
    Fine poetics.
    A big...10
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 3, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 4, 2011


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