Deepa Thomas

Rookie (28th August / Kerala, India)

Love - Poem by Deepa Thomas

Let a thousand miles come between us
I can still feel your love
Warmth of your breath
Safeness of your arms

Scaling the highest reaches
From deepest depths
Engulfing and melting me in it
Like never before

Rivers will bring me
The tranquil in your eyes
Stars will shower on me
The sparkle of your smile

Rain will drench me
With the tears we cried
Wind will carry
Your scent back to me

And I.
Will be waiting for you always
To receive and return
A thousand fold of what you gave


Comments about Love by Deepa Thomas

  • (6/25/2010 5:34:00 PM)


    Beautiful Love Poem..each word is embeded like a pearl in the necklace.... (Report) Reply

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  • Jc Lunaria (6/22/2010 3:22:00 AM)


    heart felt... what could be more gallant than to share love with some one you truly love.... great job! (Report) Reply

  • (4/10/2008 5:07:00 AM)


    Its a very nice poem... It touches you and you feel like believing in love... (Report) Reply

  • (4/13/2006 5:50:00 AM)


    You keep surprising me.... Essence of love is so well captured.... (Report) Reply

  • (5/18/2005 3:43:00 AM)


    Deepa, you have expounded the sensitive meaning of love very well indeed. And your use of poetry to express the essence of the message touched me deeply. All the best for future endeavours in the field of poetry and beyond! (Report) Reply

  • (5/17/2005 7:38:00 AM)


    Beautiful poem Deepa. Very nice. Sincerely, Mary (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 17, 2005



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