Love? Poem by Sketcher Ridpath

Love?

Rating: 5.0


Why does nobody love me?
Why does nobody care?
When I call out for help,
Nobody is there.

Why does nobody love me?
When I cry out in fear,
Through echoes in my voice,
Through salt in my tears.

Why does nobody love me?
When its so obvious,
That I'm dying inside,
-To The Audience-

Wednesday, January 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,sad
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The first four lines randomly came to me. Maybe my subconscious is speaking, but I doubt it. After the first four lines, I decided to add on. This was the outcome. Enjoy! (Created in 4 Minutes)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 27 September 2018

Why does nobody love me? When its so obvious, That I'm dying inside.. expressing the inner craving.. very fine poem created in 4 minutes.. tony

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Crayon Poet 21 August 2018

I'm glad I read your notes so my heart can stop breaking for a stranger.

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Chinedu Dike 09 February 2018

Deep feelings nicely brought forth from the heart. Brave outcry with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing Ridpath and do remain enriched.

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Sketcher Ridpath

Sketcher Ridpath

Bellingham, Washington
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