Lost And Broken Poem by Sketcher Ridpath

Lost And Broken

Rating: 5.0


Met them with no tears,
But I need to see them more,
First time in ten years,
We're all broken to the core,
That makes four of us,
We have to stick together,
That's just it, we must,
We need to make things better,
I love them deeply,
And it's always been that way,
Couldn't see freely,
Just one hundred miles away,
They say the past is in the past,
But the past can not be erased,
That's why I wear this mental cast,
And swallow this metallic taste.

Tuesday, August 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: family,love,relationship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lyn Paul 09 October 2019

How hard is past? Though how amazing the future can be. Life has been a battlefield as a youth for myself also. Write every thought to repair. You do it well. Let the next phase of your life be strength.

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 November 2018

We need to make things better, I love them deeply, And it's always been that way, Couldn't see freely, ......wearing the mental cast...... past remains in us however we may try to erase it. thank u .tony

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The Muse 28 August 2018

Gosh Sketcher! I can almost feel your anguish and pain.

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Jazib Kamalvi 28 August 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Sketcher. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 August 2018

Such a fine poem, Sketcher...10++++

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Sketcher Ridpath

Sketcher Ridpath

Bellingham, Washington
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