Inner Violence Poem by Sketcher Ridpath
Inner Violence
I feel a mad rush of violence soar,
Throughout my veins and out my pores,
I feel things I know not what for,
A battle inside of myself to restore,
A stable mentality or else I'm done for,
My inner self is becoming a civil war,
This shall last forever no nevermore,
Bringing what's inside into the outdoor.
Nice reflection on the inner turmoils and the way to expel it out.
A battle inside of myself to restore, A stable mentality or else I'm done for, My inner self is becoming a civil war, struggling from a psyhological terrific situation.... you have wonderfull portrayed such a mental state in this poem dear poet.......... there is always a way out. prayer is the best.. tony
A battle inside of myself to restore, A stable mentality or else I'm done for../// the agitation of inner inn the true mirror of life; insightful sight guides truly wherever it goes
Quite personal, but a very common experience, well crafted in to a poem, which deserves its positioning. Congratulations. Thanks for sharing. X
To recognise this battle is the beginning to changing it. You can do anything. Thank You Sketcher
Well penned poem, clearly showing the duality or good/evil that exists in our conscious mind. Congratulations! : -)
An insightful creation nicely brought forth in verse with rhythmic splendour. Thanks for sharing, Sketcher.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/3/2024 8:45:39 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Such a well crafted poem of the day..... Congrats for being chosen.......................10+++++++++++++++++++
Bernie don't need to read. No points given just for reading. It's the polite and well-crafted comment that's most important.
As I understand it, you get a point for reading a poem.