Love Ahead Poem by Amit Narayan Satpathy

Love Ahead

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I wish I had
              For my love
                          If true, yet'
'One sided'
As this world
Calls it aloud
Would find solace
In the meager sight of my love
At least in someone's lap
Looking into his eyes
With the same desire
With which I look into hers
Love is enjoyed as time passes
They say
The longing for
One another raging
In one's heart
Is the best thing
Life offers
If romance is sin
Then let me do it
To get the gin
The essence of life's
Story for me
And isn't it the same
For you
I wait to embrace
And enjoy
My dark love
Be it 'one sided or not'
For I stand still
Miles away
From such a spot!       The one I love
Beside me, her dark lover
                     Whether she
Would love me or not
                      I would not
Want to know
                      For my love would
Be like snow falling
                       Which doesn't know
For it, what's in calling
      My affection would be like
          The surface of the
            Furnace of the deserts
              Of vast Arabia
Her love, her precious kiss on my
Forehead
And her gentle touch
And the play of her black eyes
Her reciprocation
Of someone's courtship
Would be the rain
I would wait for
The time would pass
So may happen nevertheless

Thursday, January 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love and life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 11 January 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Amit. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 March 2018

If romance is sin Then let me do it To get the gin The essence of life's...love is always a mystery....... and it should remain a mystery always. that is what u are experiencing...... thank u dear poet. tony

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 January 2018

Your poem echoes full of love and romance! ....Life offers/If romance is sin/Then let me do it/To get the gin....adorable expression, a lovely poem! You may like to read my poem 'Ode to My Conscience'...Thank you

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Dr Dillip K Swain 14 January 2018

A romantic poem... unique expression..10

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Amit Narayan Satpathy 11 January 2018

Thank you Chinedu

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Chinedu Dike 11 January 2018

Beautiful love poem nicely penned from the heart. Lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing Amit.

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