Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 800,511 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Love And Hate - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

I failed to understand your love and hate game
Neither should I try to follow it nor to blame
Since you have not said it openly or put me to shame
I shall give you no chance for another charge to frame

I clearly see no visible lines
There is hardly appearance of happy smiles
You try to show nothing on your face
I feel threatened and surely out of race

I over heard you saying to some of the friends
You were cautious but not unimaginative with trends
It was not your style to give up so easily
As you had dreamed of to pass it of happily

This all proved to me very much puzzling
I was not happy even with slow rain and dazzling
It appealed me nothing but added concern and worry
I thought something unusual may happen to feel worry

You may have your own reservations
But I was unaware of any such indication
I could go up to certain level but not to desired depth
It was driving me nuts and uneasy to take even breathe

I could hardly dare to venture into shining eyes
It was very bright as if showing colorful butterflies
I could find no rain or any kind of rainbows
But yes it had so much magnetic pull to show

You stood there restless with full of pain
You were sure of emptiness in my brain
She gathered the strength and sent me smile
I did not waste a second to walk for mile

We were hand in hand and moved ahead
Some one was sure to provide the lead
Even thought I had failed to grasp or read
She was fully alive to the situation and not dead


Comments about Love And Hate by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/6/2011 8:59:00 PM)

    Maia Snow You have written a very nice poem Sir....this is really nice...a straightforward observation of me and my poems...haha
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 6, 2011



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